The weekly poem challenge at one single impression is trembling:
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tremble clefts
I played his body like an instrument
— a tuba to be precise
with rasberries blown on his bellybutton
ice nose drippy from the cold
hits higher notes
the tone tuned where skin’s
thinner — flared giggles
deepened pitch where nuzzles
nip
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Delightful and creative
wonderfully creative
I truly enjoyed this.
Great use of the prompt!
This is a fun, sensual, and creative poem. Nicely written.
I like the play on ‘tremble cleft’, ‘raspberries’ – clever word use!
sensual and well written