From the prompt of 1. haiku 2. poem about haiku, I got distracted into zips. Have you heard of zips? Addictive little form. A caesura like an open zipper between the parts. I like them best when they can read left to right or a column at a time.
found the red book on the shelf
I’ve been looking for that’s yellow
1.
double vision
arthritic fingers pinch
where sunglasses aren’t
—
2.
a kigo
observe then pivot
present contrast
Your 2 is wonderful! It dances, I can see it.
No, never heard of zips before. Must have a go some time soon!
thanks Rosemary.