Balance

Balance is the prompt at OneDeepBreath for week 72. My clumsy newbie’s tanka, too busy, too unstill, too undistilled. But one starts somewhere. Perhaps better to call it a lyrical short, two sipped breaths.

It starts for us
when we get there
late. late coming
10 minutes
break, breathe.

A second with more balance then, in a different sense.

lecture forum
one pen and pad
per person. her son,
dapper, opens one
and

And a third response to close.

on one leg
tying shoe –
cat scamp prances

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11 Comments

  1. balance

    These are wonderful. That last one is funny, since it isn’t happening to me.!
    Sandy from gardenpath

  2. The last one says it all – balance comes easy to some, not to others. An animals always win hands down.

    I’m just trying out my tanka hat too – and its not as easy as some people make it look.

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