Balance is the prompt at OneDeepBreath for week 72. My clumsy newbie’s tanka, too busy, too unstill, too undistilled. But one starts somewhere. Perhaps better to call it a lyrical short, two sipped breaths.
It starts for us
when we get there
late. late coming
10 minutes
break, breathe.
A second with more balance then, in a different sense.
lecture forum
one pen and pad
per person. her son,
dapper, opens one
and
And a third response to close.
on one leg
tying shoe –
cat scamp prances
Crafty Green Poet
I love the past one, I can just see it…
Crafty Green Poet
I mean the last one of course
Laughing at Crafty! I love the last one too, very visual.
Laughing at Crafty! I love the last one too, very visual. Jo
Tumblewords
Ah, these are great!
balance
These are wonderful. That last one is funny, since it isn’t happening to me.!
Sandy from gardenpath
The last one says it all – balance comes easy to some, not to others. An animals always win hands down.
I’m just trying out my tanka hat too – and its not as easy as some people make it look.
Whoops – I’m not good with LiveJournal. That last comment was from me – jem!
We can all learn something of balance from the cat, can’t we? 🙂 cloudscome
your last one is poetically humorous!
qualcosa di bello
Ah, yes, I adore the last one as well.