lighthouse
mom scrapes off punky-soft lower half of clapboards
down to the tar paper and strappings. she stands in
bleached-plumed sunhat on bamboo scaffoldings, leaning,
white-paints the upper half of the still intact boards.
paint tracks down the underbody of the building.
funny, the sense dreams make until waking fully.
funny, the sense dreams make when waking more.
for OSI prompt
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This hits home. Dreams have a way of working themselves into reality. Nice!
very descriptive and lovely
True. I was thinking what Tumblewords said, though not as clearly.
I could see this so clearly in my mind’s eye. Very compelling… I look forward to exploring more of your work!
Dreams can be or become our reality.
Hint: If your print were a bit larger it would be so much easier for these old eyes of mine to read when I visit you.:)
Yes, the visual imagery was crystal clear, and so sharp. Wonderful!
very rich sounding!
I love “punky-soft”!
I really enjoyed reading this. What a great take on the prompt, tres unique!
And, still, some dreams make you want to go back to sleep.
love this- I love when I remember dreams and can think about them all day long…
Very clear imagery. Very nice.
love how visually descriptive this is.