Closeness

Some recent mullings around the idea closeness to jot on the excuse of Prompt 73: Closeness. Not all constitute haiku’s brevity and resolvedness, suggestion rather than tell. Some are more lyrical shorts, one more an outline than a tanka, but decide as you may… ** from 3 rooms away a breath change. Response: “something you […]

Balance

Balance is the prompt at OneDeepBreath for week 72. My clumsy newbie’s tanka, too busy, too unstill, too undistilled. But one starts somewhere. Perhaps better to call it a lyrical short, two sipped breaths. It starts for us when we get there late. late coming 10 minutes break, breathe. A second with more balance then, […]