uphill thighs burn
caught in jagged breath tunnel –
eyes squint, mouth gape.
—
down whoosh chicory
veined pink maple keys cluster
cathedral arched boughs
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uphill thighs burn
caught in jagged breath tunnel –
eyes squint, mouth gape.
—
down whoosh chicory
veined pink maple keys cluster
cathedral arched boughs
love the first one for it’s strength and will and the second for it’s beauty. Thanks for sharing, Jennifer (life’s snapshots)
Good haiku
I particularly like the second one, very descriptive.
Crafty Green Poet
These were fun and showed the love of cycling…cool!
The Daily Warrior
I love riding a bike and these haiku capture the experience beautifully! – Tara @ Paris Parfait
Great Poem!
Good job. A rather authentic vision of cycling! Thanks for sharing that one.
Michele sent me!
Your first stance certain made me cringe! Very effective!
-Willow Grace
Both the poem and the photo are incredibly rich. Well done. (from Paris Parfait)