autumn-serious
last lighting licks raise hairs
intent downpour
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take deep breath
leaf dander in the chilled air
there’s no going back
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at first yellowed leaf
mall sets up Christmas displays
only 14 weeks!
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fall Delicious Autumn
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raising hairs
This is beautiful:
autumn-serious
last lighting licks raise hairs
intent downpour
esp. line two.
I love your icon. Reminds me of Alphonse Mucha’s art nouveau pieces.
<3 Michelle at chelleart.net/blog
Submit?
I love these! They bring the season to life. Are you planning to submit them to the Ringing of the Bards (on my wordpress blog) this week (nature theme)? Let me know. I’m hosting. jojanoski (at) gmail (dot) com.
t’s still summer in L.A. by any northern standards…so this pretty group of words has a sentimental feel for me, even though it is anticipatory…I rmeber autumn and how you could feel winter coming…like a weird dream or like this poem-
thanx