Pearl Pirie’s lists, reviews, interviews, etc. since 2005

Today is Poem in Your Pocket Day

Put a poem poesy and put it in your pocket. What to pick?
There’s a new one of mine up The Week Shall Inherit the Verse today. Disseminate that willy-nilly if you wish.
What’s the world out there but something in concert with our breaths?
Alice Burdick’s poem is up at The Toronto Quarterly invites us to think about breathing, and after that John Barlow about a nose bleeding. Like it’s path.
I went to look for another poem in particular but then saw Laura Broadbent‘s “Supple with incoherence, I have not /learned how to people myself. ” There’s a McGimpsy poem there too from Li’l Bastard but I like his interview on poet myths better than that one in particular.
There goes the calendar surprising me again. We’re already in the 3rd week of April. I was looking to point to Roland Prevost’s poem there where he said “To hammer out an existence doesn’t /mean to cast it out, make it leave.”
The BookThug blog also has been putting out more poems for National Poetry Month, including Erin Moure recently with one that starts, “for you who validated the earth with your ferocity”. Check out this Byran Sentes tight piece.
Dusie is doing a regular series again. Elizabeth Robinson’s: On Recovery starts with the hook, “There are mediate and immediate causes.”
kevin mcpherson eckhoff‘s at NationalPoetryMonth.ca fits right in with my reading bpNichol’s The Alphabet Game.
In other poetry finds, Poetic Visuality and Experimentation: A Brief Guide to English-Canadian Poetry including how to give a close read to visual poetry. It seems as soon as its not a lineated anecdote people throw up their hands and either talk about moorless relativity and all things being good, or declare it in-editable. As much as I’d like to call as visual poetry perfection out the gate, thus perfection is achievable, a guide. Yay.
Have you seen Dan Weber’s Discover your favorite letter too that whirls the characters into other beauties?
In other new, the Purdy A-Frame now accepting applications for writing residencies.

Charles Wright

Virginian poet Charles Wright was interviewed on PBS a couple years ago.He struck me as humble and purposeful. Each word is carefully considered and placed, not with patting it down but opening something up. He seems more of a archivist who considers than a preacher who tries to convince. His poems seem more the outcomes of long pondering and deft play than of trying to change one’s own mind. [the transcript].
Here’s a poem he read:

I used to think the power of words was inexhaustible,
That how we said the world

was how it was and how it would be.

I used to imagine that word-sway and word-thunder
would silence the Silence and all that,
that words were the Word,
that language could lead us inexplicably to grace,
as though it were geographical.
I used to think these things when I was young.

I still do.”

Wonderful poem. He’s got a sweet comedic bent and turn.
He uses the line breaks aloud. More than reinforcing the syntax and the meaning, they are oratory pauses mapping well to the text.
So many thousands of English or in-English translation poets exist in the band of what will resonate. A far better entry point to meet him in video than in CV.
Sestets from 2009 is in my hands. Blackbird Archive has 6 poems.
I’m reading from his Sestets: Poems (Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 2009) and Scar Tissue (Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 2009), both of which work the longer line. He uses a plainspoken vocabulary with the sense of being mildly amused but not pitching to be taken as clever. He’s there to mull and amuse himself. We listen in to his plain rhythm and syntax. He has a lively tack through it an and a lightly comic alert eye to concrete details. For example in Sestets (his 19th book), p. 16, the first half of Anniversary II read,
“Dun-coloured moth past the windowpane

Now he’s got the right idea,

Fuzzy and herky-jerky,

little Manichaean

Pulled by invisible strings towards light where it is.”
How much different it might have been had he not seem to be governed by Grice’s cooperative principles. He doesn’t blather on, nor is it frenetic leap. The spacing on the page does work. The intro line does setting of indoor and to say a moth and its colour. Would it prove something more to the audience to name a species? To say moth alone would be an abstraction and wouldn’t give a picture.
Dun, brown, old-fashioned word for excrement. It sets a tone of distance and attitude. If it were golden or wheat or bark, it might be the same colour, but the one syllable, dun has a weight to it. It feels moody with a touch of dour and a touch of romantic.
It goes past the windowpane. Is it on the inside, disturbed into flight and is trying to get out, or was visible out there only when it went past the window in the night. That has an implication at the end of the stanza where he is within or is the light that draws a moth.
But instead of staying with the moth, there’s the observe, the silent line observing then a conversational conclusion to bring it from the distance to the immediate now. And furthering it to alert it is playing with sound of herky-jerky that matches the sort of motion very well. The lines on the window of page jerk as if in moth flight themselves. The playfulness is then checked with a depth of reference to gnosticism.  Even without understanding all its connotations, there’s a tenderness and respect and equal terms given to the moth as companion. If you want to go deeper, it packs out to Mani, the religion that flourished and perished, and his meditations surrounding light and dark and intellect and reason.  A moth is already a symbol of transience but the transience takes on larger than its own life, or our lives but the ephemeral nature of cultures over centuries.
The last line in the stanza suggests puppetry. The strings then are not just of the moth’s instincts but all of our instincts. A universal force to be pulled towards the light, even when one is a creature of the night.
How much different that line would be with a comma as “pulled towards the light, where it is”. It is already not in the light. It is already flapped past the light that one is in. The room may be dimly lit enough to see a moth at the window instead of just the black hole and the reflection of the room within. But still having seen the moth, one recognizes being in a desirable place, a place where light is.
The poem is entitled Anniversary II and doesn’t indicate which anniversary it might be. Of a personal event, a death perhaps. A loss of some sort.  It doesn’t matter really. It is the quiet time for taking stock.
There’s something else that seems to mark his words, which is an informing himself, grounding in details while giving the reader credit, no overexplaing. For example, in “Return of the Prodigal”, he doesn’t need the word Son in the title so leaves it off. “Lupine and paintbrush stoic in ditchweed,/ larch rust a smear on the mountainside”, he draws the season and landscape but it doesn’t feel like an enumerated list, and isn’t blurred out into painterly comparisons. It is chosen as if for sound and precision.
Life drawings have a sharp accuracy that fiction from the head doesn’t replicate. If you precisely record not what you felt or want to convince someone of but your own direct experience, there’s a flavour that crafting in other ways doesn’t get.
By calling out particular species and particulars and pivoting as he does I stay engaged much like there is in Tweed by Phil Hall. Back to Wright,
We might know there is a mist or distance to the mountainside by adding the descriptor smear. Color isn’t enough when you could dilvulge place by name. There’s an ownership and stewardship to naming. Not some water, some plants but caring enough to give names. Anything else is dismissal, disinterest. If that’s the case why isn’t one writing about subjects that do interest. Without caring reader and writer are redundant.
In Scar Tissue he writes about writing about landscape. “The Minor Art of Self-defense”, p.  and says it is the process of being present that matters, the writing, not the subject. “Landscape was never a subject matter, it was a technique,/ a method of measure,/ a scaffold for strcturing./ I stole its silences, stepped into its hue and cry.//Language was always the subject matter, the idea of God.”

Make Poem, Make Self, Make World

So long as someone is writing, do we need to write? There is more being produced in a year in English poetry alone that one could consume in a lifetime, if one could source it all.
If it were about creating to fill a niche that would be a relevant concern but it is also about self-forming and weighing in to form society, not by being carried by but trying to effect what waves get larger or are cancelled.
Writing is about moving towards excellence, whether the writing ever gets published or recognized. It is an inner work about the process of doing and making instead of consuming and kvetching.
If we were to look at it from practical numbers, there is also a saturated market of armchair critics who don’t produce. They’d be in the camp Thoreau described as satisfied to leave it to others. “It is not so important that there should be many as good as you, as that there be some absolute goodness somewhere; for that will leaven the whole lump.”
David Wong wrote at Cracked about doing things of use, gaining skills, he said,

Being in the business I’m in, I know dozens of aspiring writers. They think of themselves as writers, they introduce themselves as writers at parties, they know that deep inside, they have the heart of a writer. The only thing they’re missing is that minor final step, where they actually fucking write things.
But really, does that matter? Is “writing things” all that important when deciding who is and who is not truly a “writer”?
For the love of God, yes.

Part of writing is the perceiving biases and around biases, knowing what you don’t know, the analyzing, the listening, the dialogue, the paying attention, the becoming a person who can create, the skills that go towards creating, promoting, editing, throwing out, cultivating the music, the rhythm, the pitch and etc.
But part of it has to be creating. Creating doesn’t have to wait until one has experienced enough. It is part of the process. Breathe in, write out.
Intentions aren’t the thing. As Wong said, “Children die every day because millions of us tell ourselves that caring is just as good as doing”.
Alright, not polishing a piece of writing isn’t the same weight in the world as a child’s death, but the effectiveness of thinking about editing and the effectiveness of sending good karma wishes to a stranger are about on par.
It is not enough to have an attitude. Henry David Thoreau wrote in the 1840s in Civil Disobedience,

“They will wait, well-disposed, for others to remedy the evil, that they may no longer have it to regret. At most they give up only a cheap vote[…]

Scathing and fault-finding, and not to say it isn’t true.
I’m an agreeable person, I think, but I rarely wholeheartedly agree with anything. But that has my cheap vote. More than a nod.

Some years ago I explained something or other to a friend about how I nod to acknowledge speech but that doesn’t mean I agree. It’s just a way of saying, go on, I’m still listening. Maybe I get it, maybe I’m trying to gather enough information to piece together what in blame’s heel is going on. It has my attention but that’s not the same as my agreement. I collect information a long time without “deciding”.
He was rocked on his heels. He had taken my silence as agreement. To his mind, you know what you agree with and if you disagree you go toe-to-toe and work it out, opposing at every move, discussing something into understanding, or more likely until the other person agrees with you. Which knocked me back on my heels.
And silence can be agreement. More than complicit even. More than hostile indifference. More than ignorance. More than too far apart in opinion to find any bridge between ideas. Silence is likely being fine with something.
But with 95% of things being generally as mildly disappointing as it is mildly amusing, one can spend energies complaining, despairing, or observing and making things better whenever you see an opening to do so. If it isn’t right, you do it better yourself so you don’t perpetuate if you can help it.
Hate river poems, avoid them, or make the best river poem ever. Bored enough to chew your own ears off at another relationship failing poem? Make an exemplar that works.
It doesn’t matter the subject really. A poem that exudes well-being and well-formed thoughts may be in any form, whether tanka or language poetry, minimalist or ramblefest, to the ideas expressed. Poems are extensions of postures in life. What poetry is good medicine is for what ails.
I’ve said before that I like Jessica Hiemstra‘s poems but that one linked there illustrates how she balances, acknowledging detailed moment of beauty without denying there is also a past in either direction and other colours and complexities. There’s a nuance but also a baseline of  helplessness to the sad and to the glad. Somehow it makes sense to me.
It’s not enough to be unhappy with a system and not voice it at every turn. It goes towards the point which David Wong wrote, “Remember, misery is comfortable. It’s why so many people prefer it. Happiness takes effort.”
Happiness isn’t getting your way necessarily, although that’s nice. Happiness is in part understanding how someone else’s mind and system works. It is partly coming to peace that you can’t change everything as Master of the Universe. It is partly coming to peace with there being way to both understand better and persuade better and gather better skills and be of more use.

Tree Press Chapbook Award

Claudia announcing the award
Claudia announcing the winner of the Tree Press chapbook contest.
Judge Matt Tierney felt it was tight enough to also give mention to Lesley Strutt’s Elbow Grease as runner up.
The winner was “Winter Music” marked by restraint and tenderness, a tension between inner tranquillity and the outer chaos.
MaryLee receiving the award
That winning chapbook was by MaryLee Bragg (left). Congrats!
Last year’s competition for a chapbook-sized manuscript was judged by Jason Camlot and won by David Blaikie. This one too will be put out by Tree Press.