metal sculpture
finish, coarsened by rust,
catches snow
Weathered Prompt from One Deep Breath.
You might also be interested in the best haiku primer I’ve read: http://blogs.law.harvard.edu/ethicalesq/dagosans-haiku-primer/
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Very visual
This is a very visual haiku, seasonal too!
Crafty Green Poet
weathered
I like this one a lot!
And love that cobalt!
Sandy from gardenpath
from Roswila
I like this one a lot. Thanks for the heads-up on the “haiku primer.” Looks really good, IMHO.
wonderful!
What a wonderful haiku. I don’t need a photo–the poem provides a window to the scene. Amazing.